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Today i take a deeper look into “How to keep a girl” from geek in the pink. Its a sequel from her other story “How to lose a girl in ten days” what is based on the hollywood movie. But now enough spoiler for now .

Its time for the normal spoiler warning. When you haven’t read it yet please make your way to tibette.com and take a look. When you have seen the hollywood movie there is no need to read “How to lose a girl in ten days” but its very good too so when you have time give it a shot. But now its time for “How to keep a girl“.

Lets start with a small overview. “How to keep a girl” in a highly non-canon story and Bette and Tina are a little younger as they are in the original series. Bette is not in the art world and Tina is not in the movie business to take your time to figure it out.

After all that push and pull stuff from “How to lose a girl in ten days” Tina and Bette finally figures the stuff out and happy times comes around. But as you know there is so much stuff to figure out so the first few chapters are more to work the things out. But the special one is because it takes in a early time of Bettes life that her parents are still alive. So we have some nice drama with the M&Ms (sorry but it was a dream to say that ) and in the end Bette and Tina get stronger and build something up.

And ha who can forgot because Tina has no longer a job Bette need to take care and i swear you will love that part . Its only in chapter 2 but wow but i think thats enough teasing for now.

Chapter 3 is a little bit of everything but the part i like at most was the key sharing one. Geek you are to funny be sure you don’t eat when you read that story . This story is more funny then her others. But because its in early life they are always like horny teenagers so the little pervys under the tibetters will have fun too . Chapter 4 is a little short and is slowly building up the story. There is no need to tell you guys that Alice as such a big mouth in every story. Even when the story is highly non-canon that is some thing that will never change .

The next chapter include some serious talk about cheating. Well ok not so serious because i get the impression that Bette is unable to have a serious talk but you need to build up something huuu ?

And then it happens. Its like that suddenly the story jumps right into your face. Geek sometimes you are a drama queen like your Bette but you know what …. We love you for that and that makes this story so funny special and emotional at same time .

And then totally casual like it was a slight there comes the magical words out “I’m in love” who would thought but it seems to comes with big steps to us. But now its time for the weekend.

The weekend chapter. Some fun and Alice is around …. but the really important part is the beach talk about Carol. And i have to say that chapter is the best one of all 5 storys that geek has written so far. Its so sad but at same time such a big love statement to Tina. Its high on my all time favorite fanfic chapters of all times. Its really big and so emotional. Geek really knows how to take it slow and then it hits you .

And after that i wouldn’t call it drama i don’t know get your own expression on it. Its time for some park fun and Alice ….. but anyway you know you always have fun with Alice. And after the park its time for some private bath time. And because its time to move on in story next morning some drama or should i say love . But now i need your POV. Please make your way to the comments and tell me if move in is always so nice because then i think i need to move out at my place .

But then time for drama and Hodie enter the place. And omg i really was worried about Bette but she has Tina and mmmm “tomorrow” will really get interesting.

So that are the first 10 chapters of “How to keep a girl“. We had some serious drama. Lots of love and we have learned so much about the characters. I really hope geek will continue that and in some chapters i will write again about it.

But now its time to give a lots of credits to the wonderfull and talented geek in the pink.

Tags: bette and tina, how to keep a girl, tibette fanfic

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